As each day goes by the loss of
innocence approaches, children outgrow their viewpoint on life and come to the
realization growing up is a part of life. In the novel “All Quiet on the
Western Front” by Erich Maria Remarque, the author portrays different aspects
of life while exploring ‘what does it mean to be an adult?’ The main character,
Paul Baumer, faces obstacles while coming up with his own conclusion on the
issue of adulthood; although at 20 it’s a hard grasp the concept. Adulthood is
independence, learning from past mistakes and evolving a new form of authority
– it’s complicated and wonderful at the same time, yet sometimes possibly
portrayed as an expectation when the reality is, it’s not easy. “We are no
longer soldiers but little more than boys… It is a strange moment when we stand
naked; then we become civilians, and almost feel ourselves to be so.”
Underneath the masks of being an adult is the inner child, and that’s just what
these men are, boys. The struggle of man vs. boys will continue until after the
boys have finished their military duties; they entered children and will leave
men. Overall the military makes a person travel ‘through hell to get to heaven’
and heaven in this case being independence - adulthood.
Marissa, I really liked how you portrayed your ideas on what adulthood means -- I totally agree with them. Your piece made me realize that we never are truly adults, because there is always some type of kid left inside of us. Your writing was great, but you might want to check some of the mechanics by making sure you have commas where they are supposed to be or maybe replacing some of them with semi-colons. Overall, your piece was great and really made me think.
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